You
got me stumped,
Now
I must think.
How
can I even contemplate,
the
idea of swirling?
Its
either an ice-cream being swirled in a mix,
Or
maybe it’s some plasticine,
Made
from rows of colored sticks?
I’m
not sure if I got this one,
And
I’m not sure if I can see,
If
anything around can swirl into my brain,
Just
to make sense of this word ‘swirl’ for me.
At
first I thought maybe its dancing,
With
my skirt swirling around my knees,
But
suddenly realized I’d fall flat on my face
If
some swirling really took place!
Considering
next a few splashes of paint
Thrown
on a paper to create a design,
Suddenly
that swirl made a lot of sense
Understanding
right before my eyes.
So
okay Eugenia, think I’ve got a writing plan
And
a way to take swirl ‘mainstream’.
Kindly
make it a little easier, for me to think again
Cause
this one, is hodgepodge on my screen!
26/03/2021
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Eugi’sCauserie weekly prompt is the inspiration for this poem.
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A delightful piece full of your fun and enjoyable swirling ideas, Donna-Luisa! 🌼
ReplyDeleteThank you Eugenia. It was indeed a bit of fun while writing. I appreciate your comment very much! :-)
DeleteYou are such a talented poet! I loved how you thought about swirling!
ReplyDeleteThank you. I appreciate your kind words :-)
DeleteYou've got a bunch of nice swirling going on.
ReplyDeleteIf you say you were stumped I'd have to disagree :D
Well done.
haha it was quite hard Jules, but a few hours in exasperation doodled this poem based on my thoughts - did not think it was a poem until I wrote it down! Thank you for compliment!
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